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 Caught  [E]
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by Jacky
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Jacky.
Well, this story didn't go where I was thinking it would, but I guess that the whole point of writing a surprise ending, eh? *Bigsmile*
You did a great job with the dialogue, and I like how you have Gram seeing right through Randy's lame story of a burglary to try to cover up him not cleaning his room-just goes to show how wisdom definitely comes with age.
And does the art of lying, I guess! *Smirk2*
Talk about having it run in the family! *Laugh* But at least he's going to get a few pointers from a pro now!
Well done, Jacky!
Kee ponw ritin gon, and have a wonderful day!

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