Hi Dipesh,
This is a wonderful essay. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the essay. You have written about an important, relevant topic. The reader will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion of why education for women is important. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the positive effects of educating women in society. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:

1)Although they have the capacity to go ahead of male persons but they are not able to do so because of the lack of education.-Should read "Although they have the capacity to go ahead of male persons, they are not able to do so because of the lack of education."

2) As we know male and female are the two wheels of a cart or two parts of a coin. A coin can't be imagined leaving the other part. A cart cannot run smoothly on only one wheeel. Similarly, the human life cannot run without the help of women. Homw is the first school and mother is called the first teacher of a child. If a mother is educated, a child can get good education at home, get knowledge, widen its mind, develop its character and mental power. A child learns the language of its mother first. Later it learns the language spoken by father and other family members. So, its initial language is known as 'Mother tongue' not as "Father tongue".
If mother is educated, the child learns good expressions but if not it learns rustic expressions.
This verifies that the female education is more important than male education. Women should be givem equal opportunity to get education. They should not be neglected at all. They can also earn name and fame in the world. As for example we can name some well-known ladies like Mao Bhandar Naike, Indira Gandhi, Margret Threture, Benazir Bhutto, Sheikh Hasina.-These are three separate paragraphs and need to be double spaced.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.