Hi LazyWriter,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about everything we owe to the soldiers who have fought, and many times died, for the freedom we enjoy. I always remember the extreme sacrifices those in the Armed Forces have made for us. I loved his poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.