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 What If I Stay!?  [E]
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by Anjelique
Review of What If I Stay!?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Anjelique,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman seeking some insight about the future of her marriage after she has been betrayed by her husband. The reader is wondering what kind of answer the husband will give. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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