Hi Njoki,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of pain and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman trying to get over a very painful breakup when the man she loves chooses another woman. I hope that the woman in the poem is able to rebuild her life. I read to the last word to find out if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.