%%USERNAME%%    %%ACCWORDS%% %%ONOFF%% |
 Review #4474318 |
  |  | Wheel of Fortune  [18+] My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?  |
| (5.0)  Greetings, ridinghood! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" ,  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.Title & Summary As an entry, there isn't a summary, but the title you included, Bathetic, is appropriate, indeed.  My First Impression I had to look up the definition. The word bathetic sounds so close to pathetic but of course, has another meaning. Mushy, hokey, soppy, etc.  After learning this, your 24 syllable poem makes perfect sense! Great work!Punctuation/Grammar/Typos  Everything looks great!Other Suggestions  None whatsoever!Thoughts/Emotions  I do not think you are bathetic at all with such thoughts of revelling in the magick of small things.  I do the same thing!  My favorite... I revel in the magick of small things Nicely written!  Have a great day and  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
|
|||
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
You have not yet responded to this review.