Hello rl_gallear,

Thanks for sharing your writing with us. This review is part of "a very Wodehouse challenge" .

I learned a lot about Saturn from reading your poem. It was a very educational and scientific viewpoint on the planet. I'll admit,I had to search some of the phrases and words used here because I didn't know fully what they meant. This whole poem was just scientific fact after scientific fact. Sixty-two moons? Wow! I really liked the last two lines of the poem best because they flowed so well together and were connected between the moons and the rings.

The poem has a consistent ABB rhyme scheme in triplets, but I did notice that the stanzas themselves vary widely in syllable count. It makes it so that each stanza flows well, but putting all the stanzas together it doesn't flow as smoothly.

I hope this worked out well for your science poetry project! I'd definitely grade highly for all those Saturn facts.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .