Hi Kingcy80,
This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the article. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about a time in your life when you were involved, romantically, with a person who thought you were not good enough for. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.