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Review #4474456
Viewing a review of:
Little Poems - Haiku - Tanka - Etc  [E]
A place to share my little poems, haiku, tanka, than bauk, 24 Syllable, etc
by Tinker
         Review for entry/chapter: "Lucky Charm " 
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, Tinker ! I am reviewing "Lucky Charm "  because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title & Summary
         I absolutely love this title! There is no summary because it's an entry, though you do include notes explaining information about the contest you have entered this in.

My First Impression
         A great piece for this time of year, with St. Patrick's Day right around the corner. *Shamrock*

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* No suggestions.

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* None.

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* Brought a smile to my face! I loved the slightly naughty reference! I definitely could picture this!

         *Starb* My favorite lines...
                             With a wicked wink
                             and slightly naughty raillery,

*Penguin* Nicely written! Best of luck in the contest! *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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