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Greetings, AJW!
This is a really nice and touching tribute to your grandfather, and I know he'd be proud to read it.
I can tell from your words how much he missed going to visit where his ancestors were born, but I think it's fantastic that your whole family now resides in the same hometown where his folks were born! And now, finally, even though he may no longer be with you physically, your grandfather does too.
My only suggestion would be to double space the paragraphs and maybe increase the font size (some of us old-timers don't have 20/20 vision anymore *Bigsmile*)
I have a wee bit of Irish in me blood, so I'll try to sing out his favorite song, even though I only know the words you've supplied! *Smile*
Kee ponw ritin gon, AJW! Thanks for sharing this, welcome to WdC (again, since I reviewed you once before!) and have a wonderful St. Patrick's Day!

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