Hi Palomvia,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with anxiety and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who dreams that others are trying to waste their time. We should try to make the most of our time and not let others waste it. I loved the imagery in this poem. It puts the reader completely into the emotions felt by the speaker. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.