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 | vampire bite marks .  [13+] though rather ambiguous, this is self harm themed. please practice self-care !!  |
| (4.5)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Goot eeeevening, Eve Ivers...  I like this! I'm no expert on poetry, but I'm guessing it's a variation of free verse poetry, and I like the way you delivered it. The style is one thing, but not using capital letters is a cool form also. I love dark stories (and horror), so to read this about a vampire admiring the bites on his/her body is pretty unique, and that's not easy to do these days. The whole piece reads naturally and flowed smoothly, but it was that ending line that really made this shine! I was NOT expecting that! Well done, my friend! By the way, you're writing does NOT suck! You've got a lot more talent than you think, so cheer up, my fiend friend!  Kee ponw ritin gon, Eve, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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