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A Dream  [13+]
World peace may seem
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review of A Dream  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title
         The title, A Dream, signifies a dream for world peace.

My First Impression
         Nice work on the Retrac poetry form! And a great piece for the contest, as it's unique. *Smile*

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* No suggestions.

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* No suggestions.

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* World peace and unity is a great dream and I certainly hope this dream comes true. *Heart* Best of luck in the contest!

         *Starb* My favorite lines...
                             Working together it is feasible;
                             in unity achievable.

*Penguin* Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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