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Hello willwilcox!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how excellent the writing is here. There is foreshadowing from the beginning, an ominous feeling permeates as the reader thinks about what is about to be set loose.

The story needs to be newly written for the contest, so sadly, this fine story was disqualified. However, I wanted to send a review so you will know I read it and appreciated what I read very much.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This line just set the scene perfectly and gave me chills:

"Death was coming, and he was bringing his friends."

There is evil afoot but I had hopes for the boy, his Dad and the puppy. It is always a good thing when evil gets its due.

I enjoyed reading this very much.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! My reviews give you my response and reaction to what I read. This is not meant as a harsh critique or a detailed editing dissertation. I love to read and I thank you for sharing your chilling story with me!

Fine, descriptive and chilling writing!*Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 03/31/2019 @ 10:44am EDT
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