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Greetings Satuawany !

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Experience has taught our speaker, Daryl/Eros, to exercise caution when dealing with humans. He shows compassion for them and this empathy takes him to a place from where he might not return.

This, in turn, makes his mother figure sad and she urges him to follow the traditional methods of bringing people together, which seems to be his mission.

He has a more subtle approach in mind, one that lets his friends find each other on their own, with slight nudges from him.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

Daryl charts his own path too, and, thus risks everything. I think that goes very well with the prompt quotation. I liked the humanizing habit of smoking. It added to the smokey haze of the setting.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! I write about my reactions to and my understanding of the reading. This is not meant to be a detailed editing exercise or a harsh critique. I share my thoughts and the emotions that your story provoked. I felt like Daryl was trying his best to be kind and that's something rare in humans and others these days. He even stuck up for his friends, far different from the mother who would have him do things her way.

Well done!*Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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