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 SpacePlanet Tonkim  [18+]
Dimcea is the Leader of Tonkim. But all that is about to end, in more ways than just that.
by PureSciFi
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Greetings PureSciFi !

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Dimcea is a futuristic leader under pressure. I found her predicament timely and relevant to recent happenings in the news. Like our contemporary world leaders, she is tasked with giving a speech to summarize the state of the SpacePlanet.

Things are not going well in Tonkim. Dimcea uses her second in command, Kallic, as a sounding board.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

In keeping with the prompt, Dimcea chooses to give a speech and not duck the issues, although Kallic urges her to refrain from doing so at this inopportune time.

I liked the sly humor of having some of those listening portrayed as disembodied heads. The history of the SpacePlanet is reviewed in the speech, but Dimcea takes on an arrogant tone. There is a lot of clever observation in this imaginative story.

She wants a force field and is determined to have it one way or another. I also liked the observation that it would probably happen later, maybe after her reign. At this point Kallic takes matters into his own hands.

The more things change, the more they stay the same, even in space.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews.

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! My review is my reaction to what I read. Your story definitely captured the flavor of prompt and gave it a new twist. I do not do detailed edits, spelling analysis or harsh critiques because I do not enjoy that. I did enjoy reading your story very much.
Well done!*Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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