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 I Am The Cook  [E]
We all love stories in the kitchen of medieval worlds...at least I do. Here's an attempt.
by Mehve Rider
Review of I Am The Cook  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "I Am The Cook"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like reading this piece. It reminds me a show Master chef kitchen. It is one of my favorite show. I love watching the contestants cook with great enthusiasm.
You beautifully painted a cooking scene. In your piece Tyra an amateur cook along with other contestants trying their best to impress the judges . Some adding pepper on roast, some slicing potatoes, some making cream fillet.

I think in some places you need paragraph break. It seems that this is a first draft of yours. It will be more interesting if you edit a little.

Thanks for sharing your work with us. It's pleasure to read your story.

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