Your third verse has too many syllables in the first line. It has seven where most have five. If you said 'I'm instead of 'I am' it would be a bit smoother. It's just a suggestion.

There are many spots where the fluidity is off because the line may have too many syllables. You might want to go through the poem and work on it some more.

This is a lovely poem, filled with such tenderness. It deserves to be smoothed out.

Verse six...try 'You've become' and take out 'now'. It flows better.

You put such tenderness into this poem. I love it. Let me know if you rework it some and I may be able to give a better rating. It is worth the effort.
Thanks for sharing it with us. Really.
love, LinnAnn