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What an adorably cute poem. I loved it and what a lesson to my mouth. I often speak up when I should shut up. This is a great lesson to all parents, I hope you share it with others on line.

I remember back to those days when my children were little, and much more lovable than they can be as adults. lol

Is this written as a true event? If so you must be a wonderful parent. You little tyke is very lucky.
Your rhyming is consistent and well done.
You pulled me in and kept my attention throughout.
Thanks so much for sharing this.
love, LinnAnn
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