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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 
Your poem is so thoughtful. I like the images and symbol you have used here to create the atmosphere of the poem.

“barren trees” “white” “howling wind” “a red cardinal” all the things blended together created a beautiful picture of icy winter days.

Nature brings peace in our mind which reflected in this poem.
I like the lines
“He passes over then,
out of your sight.
He on with his life,
you on with yours.”

I enjoy the scents, colors and sounds this poem.

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