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Given: Apr 4, 2019 at 4:34pm
Length: 736 Characters |
722 w/o WritingML
If any husband grabbed me or my daughters that way, he might find himself flattened, not just sleeping on the couch. lol
'Daintily clad bosom' is so incongruous with all the rage this man is feeling.
You did well. I was annoyed with you for being so angry so fast, and over such a little thing. I mean, a gouge down the side of the new car from a bike, or something, but a lawn decoration? You did draw me in, and you did get me to feel. I was very annoyed with the husband/dad character.
I do like how you had him soften and finally be humane about it. Nice to know there is a 'dad' figure out there that can appreciate family togetherness, even if there is no snow. lol
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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