It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like your story of Easter bunny and crazy unicorn. You wrote it for the contest the Pink Fluffy Unicorn. The way you wrote makes me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. You have used punctuation marks in your poem. I like the lines
“They couldn't figure out what to say,
so they decided to work for pay.”

The tone I find this poem is cheerful. It captures the prompt beautifully. Thanks for sharing it with us.