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Jack Uses His Bean  [E]
A bit of a twist on the classic tale
by Words Whirling 'Round
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

I decided to read and review some poems and I select your "Jack Uses His Bean" . This review is for "The WDC Angel Army" 

I try to read a poem every day. Every poems tells a story. I believe the poem is a reflection of sadness love, beauty.

This poem written with a famous fairy tale Jack and the Beanstalk. I appreciate how each line started with a certain letter. The poem has good rhythm . It rhyming is soothing to the ear. I like the scenery you have sketched here. It gives the readers a good feeling when they read it. I like the last stanza
“Bury some coins and dress up the bean,
Enter the town and make a big scene.
All the curious folk were soon gathered ‘round -
Now Jack told the tale of a bean that he’d found”

Thank you for sharing your work!

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