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  |  | Wheel of Fortune  [18+] My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?  |
| (4.5)  Hi ridinghhood! I am so happy to review your unique entry in the 'I Write in 2019'. I always enjoy your wisdom and tarot connections!  The short verse is clear in its imagery and I like the mirror effect of a rain storm and the inner termoil that you show. The third line is wonderful in imagery and soundscape. "water cure" is cool! I wondered about the last line "with out" as to whether it should be one word, yet the pause is interesting. Regular spelling is "without" and can mean outside. So I understood it.   Your response to the word prompt is brilliant with its connection to the natural world and human psyche. Well done in only 24 syllables too.I enjoyed the added Tarot card and the idea of Communion makes sense with your insight in the poem.  Thanks for sharing your original vision! eyestar  
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