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The Child of the Water  [E]
A glance into the past of one of my characters from the Elementals series I'm working on.
by LazyWriter
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Child of the Water"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 
I like the short story. I like the descriptions and presentations.
I'd particularly enjoyed the fighting scene with the sea monsters. You have described it beautifully. I had a very clear picture of him in my mind.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your story. It’s well written.

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