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This is wonderful poem and yet so inspirational, the poet tells us that Today is everything. Our entire life live on present but we love to focus only on the future.
Yes, our past is the foundation of our future. But too much thought of past jeopardize our present.

The title fits your poem. The rhyming is soothing to the ear. Your poem gives the reader a good feeling.

“Touch a leaf, hug your friend, pet your kitty;
Smell the fresh air, the flowers, the bakery;
Savor your food, quench your thirst, enjoy;
Hear the music, tune in to others, relish silence”

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