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*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the story of Pink Fluffy Unicorn you have sketched here. The descriptions are well written and very vivid and artistic.

*Unicorn* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear(a.a.b.b). I like rhyming poems. The tone I found is cheerful and soothing that keeps me read it at the end.
I like the lines

"On Sasha he placed, on her glistening horn,
Baskets galore, for the pretty unicorn
To her golden mane he tied just a few
And in her mighty tail, he wove some too"

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has good rhythm. It flowed beautifully.

*Unicorn* STRUCTURE & FORM:you have beautiful thoughts inside every line.

*Bulletg* THEME: I enjoy the scents, colors and fonts of the Pink Fluffy Unicorn poem.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.
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