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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

You have written a very good piece of poem with a unique concept,I appreciate the simplicity, The last two stanzas were my absolute favorite.
You are my everything,
my life, my reason for living,
for I am a mirror image of you

I admire every word choice.

Great job! Keep writing!!

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