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 Haunted Hotel  [13+]
What could happen when you inherit a haunted hotel?
by River
Review of Haunted Hotel  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi River!!

This is indeed a good entertaining piece. It's been a pleasure to review your story "Haunted Hotel"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

It’s a good story. Beautifully used the prompt “What could happen when you inherit a haunted hotel?“ . I like the dialogues. They floats well with the characters. I could easily imagine the scene. The suspense of the ending makes me wonder what's going to happen next.

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