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Aloha, Dragonwoman!
I thought this was neat. I’m a bookworm and I spend a lot of time in the library (I actually had a chance to work in a library once, but I turned it down *Headbang*), so to have the ghost of a famous author visit your own library and sit around telling stories was a great concept. The only other ghost I’d like to see would be Edgar Allen Poe.
The setting was perfect, the spelling and grammar flawless, and the ending, albeit a tad soft, wasn’t bad either.
One comment:
‘I was about to clear my throat which caused the visitor to vanish’ (this was kind of confusing since it sounds like you did make Twain disappear -- I think it would be better if it was ‘which would have caused the visitor to vanish’-just a suggestion)
Kee ponw ritin gon, DW! ‘Twas a pleasure to read, and have a great day!

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