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Review of Just a Short Walk  
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Konnichiwa, Hugh!
This isn’t bad. I like the paranormal factor you brought into it with Peter rising from the grave and taking Sally on a tour of the deeper woods, and that ending was nice, but somewhat unexpected. I was a little worried for a moment there when this tall, handsome stranger approached her, especially after her mother had already warned her about the dangers.
I guess that’s what I get for not paying closer attention to the byline, huh?
Kee ponw ritin gon, Hugh! Congratulations on the victory, and have a great day!

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