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 Unread  [E]
A poem about all the things said and not said.
by ElectricPineappleArt
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This was so heartbreaking. It brought to my memory of a time when I had letters tied with a ribbon. The man I married found them and started to read them. I felt so violated. They were private.
I can see the man laying in bed on a dark, silent night, wondering if she still cares. I am very tender hearted and this really touched me. You captured my attention and held it.

Seriously, this broke my heart. You kept the pattern of each verse, I just really love rhyming poetry. This was again, very emotional and heart breaking. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
love, LinnAnn
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