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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

You paint a enchanted picture of a quite place. Where beautiful lights awakening the lonely wood and how this wood looks bright under the night sky.
The plot is simple but beautiful.

I like the images. Ultraviolet leaves , Grass, Silhouette shrubs clouds, Crickets, fireflies blended together creates the scene of The blue hour. The tones I find in this poem is cheerful.

I really liked the way you put out your feelings.

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