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 So You Think You Can Vote?  [E]
A proposal on fixing the American voting system
by livp
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Livp!
This is really, really good for your first piece on here, and I love your sense of humor! Not only are your ideas for this new system of determining how we should elect our next president hilarious, but they sound feasible too! After that fiasco in our last election, I'm all for getting rid of the electoral college!
Using a game show format, especially the ones with Jeopardy and the Kardashians (which I'm not fond of all, but I think it work for the purpose!), would be great to see how smart these political buffoons are and how they go about their daily lives. Maybe we could add a 'Survivor' thing in there too?
Very well done, my friend! The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), and the entire piece read smoothly and professionally. It's obvious you have some writing experience in your background, if not journalism as well. In fact, this would be an excellent perfect Op-Ed piece!
An 'idiot-in-chief'? *Rolling*
My only suggestion would be to put this in a larger font and double space (or indent) the paragraphs.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Livp, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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