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Hello there, MM3!
This is kind of definitely weird, but for some reason, I also thought it wasn't too bad.
I don't know how came up with this (unless perhaps your friend/gf asked you to), but the idea of this 'magic bologna ride' is very unique. I'm guessing you may have a food fetish or something similar?
Seriously though, the lyrics matched the song perfectly, and about the other only thing I can say for this is perhaps you could send this to Weird Al Yankovic?
Kee ponw ritin gon, MM3, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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