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OFF-CUTS!  [XGC]
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by Laurie Razor
         Review for entry/chapter: "I Gave Her My Heart" 
Review of OFF-CUTS!  
Review by Angus
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Rated: XGC | (5.0)
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Ahoy, Laurie!
This is cool! I like the form you wrote it in so that each sentence is its own paragraph, and the simplicity you used really stands out. It's like you're right here in front of me telling me this sad story of woe!
The bloody wounds of a broken heart... *Cry* *Laugh*
Seriously though, you did a nice job of gradually building up the tension and suspense, and even though we knew you wouldn't get this girl in the end, we had to find out just why or why not.
Talk about bad luck!
Very well done, my friend, and I can see why Strega chose this as the winner!
Congratulations!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Laurie! You've proven yourself a very worthy adversary in "SCREAMS!!!" , so keep up the great work!

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