Hi Kayleigh,
This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with anxiety as Kate is nervous about something. The reader is wondering what is making her so nervous and out of sorts. They will read on to find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. The reader is anxious to know how Kate will do with her acting lessons. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.