Hi Lovekills.xm,
This is a wonderful essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the essay. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the emotional effects of being bullied. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)ourfels-Should read "ourselves".

You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.