Hi Court Sumrall,
This is a fantastic poem. The disbelief. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about what bullying does to the victim's life. I have never been bullied, and I have every sympathy for those that have been. I hope every victim will get the help they need to get the bullying to stop. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.