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 Group Chat  [13+]
Two Friends are in a group chat, other people join and their conversations get weird.
by FumpleDink
Review of Group Chat  
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello there, FumpleDink!
I think I've only been in a chat room once in my life, and I could barely keep up with the conversation, let alone know WTH they were talking about. But this one wasn't too hard to follow, although I'm a little confused about the UwU thing.
Regardless, for your first piece on here, it wasn't too bad. Definitely unique, and at least you've got a good sense humor. I love the way you ended this with little tiny donny j rump being left all alone in the chat room all by his lonesome...*Cry*. *Rolling*
Ha! Not even GOD wanted to talk to that fruitcake! And he should consider himself lucky that Lucifer got off the chat line before he showed up, otherwise Luci might have dragged his sorry a** down into the deepest bowel of Hell a little earlier than he planned! *Devilish*
Sorry. I'm not supposed to talk politics here. Seriously. That's a no-no, or at least ill-advised, but I couldn't resist.
Anywho, as I was saying this isn't bad, and since it was a piece about a chat line with chat dialogue, I can't fault any of your spellings or other verbiage. Darnit!
Kee ponw ritin gon, FumpleDink, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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