Hi Jesvi,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of uncertainty and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who suddenly finds a deep connection with someone they love where one didn't exist before. I am hoping that this relationship will keep growing stronger and last. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.