Hi J.M.
This is a wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the little girl here will learn to draw. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a five year old girl who discovers they have an interest in drawing. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is full developed and believable. The story concentrates on the five year old girl, and she comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)then i seen-Should read "then I saw".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.