Hello, Detective
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019

My Impression
This is a lovely poem with very nice imagery. I love to travel, so this poem really speaks to me. I like the details here, especially the scent of peppermint (which has a nice bit of rhyme to it) drifts through the warm summer air. Also, the currency measured by courage. Very nicely done!


Suggestions
I only have two suggestions. I would recommend adding a cover picture to this and using all three of the genre slots. You are only using two. Using all of them helps your item get seen by more people.


Grammar/Punctuation/Usage
This isn't a big deal, my writing software does the same thing, but all of the words that begin a new line start with an uppercase letter. I would consider making any of them lowercase that do not begin a new sentence.


Rating Explanation
I really like this. I'm giving a 5 for originality and awesome imagery. Nicely done!

IceSkating SugarCube

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