*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4484976
Review #4484976
Viewing a review of:
Still, The Soldiers Fight Today  [ASR]
Written for the Honoring our Veterans contest
by IceSkatingSugarCube
Review by Tinker
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Hi, I'm reviewing your Still, the Soldiers Fight Today for I Write. I enjoyed reading this piece.

The form suited the subject well, quintains with rhyme aabbC ccddC eeffC etc. L5 of each quintain, a refrain.


The subject close to my heart, I'm married to a war Vet.

My favorite lines:

"with human ego, human hate
the source of all these wars to date"

Nice,

~~Tink
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4484976