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  |  | Wheel of Fortune  [18+] My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?  |
| (4.5)| Hello, I'm Mastiff, and I'm going to review your work! I'm just an amateur, so take it all with a grain of salt, as it's just my opinions. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I appreciate being able to read it. This is a review for I Write 2019, as I posted above you!  First impression: This was actually an odd first read for me, because what I think now isn't the way I thought on my first quick read. I've well into a book series about medieval armor and fighting, that has a great deal of the old religions in it as well. That's where my head first went, but I think I was wrong. At least in part. Things That Might Make It Better: I thought I knew what buckram was, but I looked it up to make sure. It isn't something you come across every day. I think, if you could have spared a syllable elsewhere, a modifier to the cloth would help. Any good old time remedy would work. Just an idea. Mechanics: Syllable counter says... 24!  I love that counter. It's syllablecounter.net and handy.Things I Like:Well, now I have to say, the second read made me think. This, I believe is a response to the local state laws in places I'm glad I'm not. Time is going to tell. Final Comments Well, don't aim at me, I'll be on your side. I don't much like bullies. Mastiff 
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You responded to this review 05/21/2019 @ 9:44am EDT