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 When the Chip's Down  [ASR]
Zan and Hunter face off over a chip.
by Linn Browning
Review by Angus
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Greetings, Linn Browning!
This isn't bad for short FF piece. I like the idea of Zan helping Hunter maintain his sobriety after all that time, even though he was giving up on it. To be honest, I've been in Hunter's shoes before, so I know what it was like.
Anyway, great spelling and grammar (Hell, you're a librarian! What should I expect? *Laugh*), and the whole piece read smoothly.
Well done, my friend!
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