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 |  | A Box of Weeds  [18+] Flash fiction stories...  |
| (4.5)| Wuzzup, Teresa? I like this. It’s a nice little sci/fi piece that reminded me a little of Thelma and Louise (only because of the two women traveling around the country in that car), and that ‘clone’ ending was pretty good. For them both to be marry this guy and then find out he was a clone at his funeral would certainly be unsettling, but then to have his other clones instructed to kill them would be just flat our freaky! Run, girls, run! The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), but I do have a couple of comments/questions. Don’t worry; I don’t expect you to answer them, but maybe think about them? I hate when people knit-pick my stories to death over trivial crap, especially little short stories like this! One: with that many clones running around, it’s kind of weird that they both married the exact same one (I know, he was the only clone in their town), and two: just think if one or both of them had a child by Phil! Sorry. This piece just got me to thinking, which for me can be a very dangerous thing!   Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Congratulations on the HM, and have a wonderful day!
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