Hi Tess,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with indecision and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone doubting the presence of God in their lives because of the conflicts and hardships they have gone through. I am hoping that the speaker will find God in their lives and turn to Him for support. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You do not use punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.