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 Heart of a Brother  [E]
Denny hears a noise and Marek tries to keep from waking Steve up.
by Linn Browning
Review by Angus
In affiliation with Cross Timbers Groups  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Aloha, Linn!
This is a nice tale of kids being kids and the relationship they have with each other, even in semi-alarming situations. The reader can tell how much Marek's brother and sister mean to him, and it even had a happy ending with Steve's reference to that old show, The Waltons (dang, I'm getting old! *Shock2*).
Great spelling and grammar, and you did a nice job with the prompt.
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Good luck in the contest, and once again, welcome to WdC!

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