I know it's picky, lol but it should be hard cooked egg. We should never boil them. makes the yokes green.

I enjoyed your little story. It was quite cute and you did such a good job putting in the emotion of parting. I am impressed.

You did well with the little things that made it so real, hands on hips, holding face, hands in hair. Good touches to make it real.

Just as I was getting depressed with the ending, and the heartbreak, you pulled a happy ending out of the bag and made me smile. I like the way you slowly wound your way to bring in the kittens and working out how the wife would join him.

I thought it interesting you spelled her name Bee instead of Bea.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Love, LinnAnn